Line Editing

Make your writing stronger without losing your voice.

Line editing focuses on how the story is being told at the sentence and paragraph level.

The goal isn't to rewrite your book into someone else's voice. It's to strengthen the voice that's already there.

Line editing may address:

• Awkward or unclear sentences
  
• Repetitive language
  
• Overexplaining
  
• Weak dialogue
  
• Dialogue tags
  
• Internal thoughts
  
• Emotional depth
  
• Sentence flow
  
• Word choice
  
• Showing versus telling
  
• Unnecessary exposition
  
• POV consistency
  
• Character voice
  
• Scene transitions

My rate is by word count and then $0.012 per word.